the tide rushes in
i feel your hand on my leg.
the waves crash against the sand
i feel our hearts beat in time
the water licks our toes
as i feel your hand creep higher.
the sound of the waves pulling back
makes me breathe harder.
i feel your hand over my stomach
as the tide comes in
i feel it over my heart
as the waves crash against the sand.
i feel your lips on my throat
as the water licks our toes.
i feel you within me
as the sound of the waves pull back.
with each coming wave
i feel you cum.
with each receding wave
i feel myself let go.
our bodies moving like
the to-and-fro of the water.
our bodies moving like
the carelessness of the waves.
i feel our heart beats calm
as the tide pulls back.
i feel our heart beats calm
as we head back home.
Wow... this one fills me with longing and wishing...
ReplyDeleteI can hear the rhythm of the ocean coming through your words. Great job!
Wow....that a steamy piece is this!
ReplyDeleteI freakin' love it!
I can almost feel the....ocean lapping at my toes.....(ahem)...
Krista: thank you. You have no idea how much your words mean to me
ReplyDeleteKathryn: lol..when i my hubby first read it he was like, "Woah, i didn't expect that line at all".